Line:Fusion Series: None Book Length: 212 pages Book Type: Trade Paperback Publisher: Ellora's Cave Publishing ISBN: 9781419958465 In Stock: YES Price: $12.99

Nights of Desire By: Marilyn Lee (Read Excerpt) E-mail this product to a friend Nine years after the death of her fiancé shattered her hopes of love, marriage and kids, thirty-year-old Tempest Marshall feels her biological clock ticking away. Afraid she will never love again, she decides to become a single mother — giving her child her dead lover's name. Her plan to carefully choose a stranger to father her child is upset when the morning after the annual office party she wakes naked in her boss's bed. Layton Grayhawk has been impatiently waiting until time and circumstances finally contrive to land the woman of his fantasies just where he wants her — in his arms and bed. Just as things finally seem on track for him to claim her as his own, she reveals her plans — plans that threaten to tear the two apart. Quantity:

Love Out Loud

Product Rating: (2.00)   # of Ratings: 2   (Only registered customers can rate) (Only registered customers can rate) 5 - Must Read! 4 - Recommended reading 3 - Enjoyable 2 - Could be better 1 - Not recommended 0% 50% 100% Sort: New to Old RE-SORT COMMENTS: Helpful to Less Helpful Less Helpful to Helpful New to Old Old to New High to Low Rating Low to High Rating Showing comments 1-1 of 1 1. Jennifer on 6/1/2010, said: I have ever been so disinterested in a story or its characters in my life. I had to stop a force myself to start again multiple times. What makes me mad is that I did not even want to buy this story but I was interested in reading "Love Out Loud" the second book to this series, so I bought this e-book thinks that I would be missing out but boy was I wrong. . Look just some I am not acting like some random poster. I’ll include my e-mail and if anyone wants to contact me about the comments I have made then I will be wall to explain why I was so frustrated with the book and pick out specific seems for you., I just don’t think I have enough room to do it here. The main characters are in no way endeared themselves to the reader. Tempest ill rational behaviour is at time so frustrating that I honestly wished I could just reach through my computer screen and just slap that woman silly. I found Tempest and Layton’s struggle to define their relationship disingenuous. It was hard to believe that tempest and Layton are mature enough to be in an adult relationship. Their sexual relationship is very awkward as well. Tempest is like the boy who cried wolf when it came to sex, she goes hot and cold every other moment. So your it gets to the that you are not sure if you should classify Layton’s actions as sexual harassment tor rape or just pray that Layton would just dump Tempest and find a woman who won’t act like such and silly little bitch who can’t make up her mind. Oh and in the description, did I miss the warning from supernatural elements that are included in the novel? You want to know how normal people find out that they are pregnant, they take a fucking pregnancy test at home or they go to the doctor. They do not have the brother of the main male character touch the main female characters stomach in order to confirm conception. That was such bullshit. I kept thinking, “Bitch, at the very least pee on a stick”. Oh and I am just suppose to except that because Layton’s family is Cherokee, his brother will just have this supernatural ability? In addition, this issue with Layton’s ex-wife is awkwardly done. I am not sure if his past needed to stretch out as much as it did in this story. It did not help move the plot along or because of the way he author rushed over the way Layton and Tempest got together in the beginning and had established that they had a close relationships early on. The concerns that were being raised latter own just seemed unnecessary because we already had the answers to those questions. In addition, what am with the bullshit that only girls need to see their parents I in a stable relationship? I think that it was a horrible idea to promote, children whether they are male or female benefit from seeing and having two parents who love each other. I hate the implication that one sex is better equipped than the other to deal with the pain of having estranged parents. Layton and Tempest is the last people who should be in a relationship or have a child. Not because they are incompatible but because they are too immature to deal with something as important rising a children especially considering that for a good chunk of this novel they aren’t even able to be honest about what they want form this relationship. Look, I do not mean to be harsh or sound like I just chugged a bunch of hateorade but the story was unacceptable. It hard while I have read other stories f room this author like “nice girls do or Falling fro Shade and enjoyed them, but this story has really soured me to anything else she has written, I’m not sure if I’ll buy any more of her stories. Sugarbaby__92@hotmail.com Was this comment helpful? yes no   (4 people found this comment helpful, 0 did not) Showing comments 1-1 of 1